Here's the only preview chapter I have a copy of left. The promo chapter. I have a full one written out, but I dun feel like posting it here. >:P
* BOOM * * A bridge is collapsed in front of the car, while the French Police chase them into it * DAMN! How are we supposed to get outta this one, shrimp? Where's your "god" now?
* Daniel hits Jacke on the head with the Bible, then mutters a few words * * All of a sudden, a second explosion goes off, and sends teh debris over the car and into the police cruisers * ......O.O. Wow. I'm never gonna say anything like that again. Is the loot still there? Yep, the whole kit kaboodle. Me and Daniel also picked up the two kids. They're KOed in the back. Daniel and I, George. Anyway, yes. We have everything. NOW, we need to get back to the furnaces, and then see what the Lord will ask of us next. Allright, lemme get us outta here. I'll take care of these traitorous bastards.
* Jacke throws a few cherry bombs at the remaining police, then George floors it, taking the car through the now open passage *
End of that chapter. It's a teaser. With 10 new members on MangaWorks, I'll post the first official chapter that will be copied and saved on MangaWorks.
Here are the two characters I have for now.James, The Fox KingKayla, the Winged Queen.
That's all for now.