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« on: Feb 05 2005, 11:39 PM »
Chapter One: One Thing leads to another..

"Can anyone tell me the answer to this question?" The voice came from a monotone male.
Great..here it comes
"Anyone?"
Yep..no one's gonna answer
"Anyone?"
Gah! what kinda class of dipshits have i been put in with?!
"Anyone?"
"The answer is 327!!" spoke a student without raising his hand.
"what was that?" Asked the monotone teacher.
"augh..right..sorry Mr. Sween.." The student raises his hand.
"Yes, Technic..what is the answer to this problem?"
Technic let out a soft sigh,"it's 327..."
"Correct.." Spoke Sween. "Hm, since class ends in 5 minutes, i might as well give your homework for the weekened."
There was a loud class groan. Everyone knew that Mr. Sween always gave the hardest Algebra homework. It was usually over 100 problems dealing with the current Math subject.
"I can't believe i'm stuck in this moronic class...i bet it's that bull..Duke..who brings down the whole class..just him being around makes everyone lose atleast 50 of thier 51 Iq points.."
The next thing Technic felt was a hard punch to the head. It felt more like someone smashing a rock against his head but he could stand it.
"what was that tiny?" Spoke a rather loud and gruff voice.
"oh..hi duke..didn't notice you there." He huffed a little, "then again..with a smell like yours..i can't believe i didn't.." Duke hit him in the head once again with his large fist.
"One day you're gonna push me too far tiny.." Duke let out a stupid grin, that grin almost always ment that someone was gonna get thier ass kicked. A couple of his friends, Cronies other would say, chuckled at this and grinned. Duke got out of his apparently too small desk and walked out the door, his cronies followed quickly behind.
"And one day you're gonna learn to take a bath.." Technic rolled his eyes and packed up his belongings. He was halfway down the hallway when he realised he was too busy insulting the class that he forgot to pay attention to what the assignment was. He would've quickly rushed back to the room if it wasn't for the 7ft Bull anthro directly behind him.
"So tiny..i told you you were gonna push me too far, and guess what..today is that day." He crossed his arms infront of his chest, that damn stupid grin of his spread across the discusting bull lips. Again his cronies chuckled and stood back, They and Technic knew that a fight was about to happen.
"N-now Duke..don't be s-so hasty..might hurt someone.." Technic backed up, his tail twitched then slid between his legs and pointed out infront of him a bit. He was afraid of this bull for some reason, he did not know why.
"Oh look, the little foxy-woxy is scared like a little baby-waby." Duke laughed and took a step forward. "Let me show you what happens to smartasses like you who fuck up my day tiny.." He took another step closer rolling up his stretched to the max sleeve still grinning.
"oh look..the moron knows a bad word.." Technic said without thinking. He knew he was already dead so all he could do was joke about it now."I didn't even think you could use that word, ya horned shit.."
Duke stopped in his tracks for a second then stepped forward a third time. He was now but inches from Technic."I don't believe it, you STILL have the nerve to say that.." He pulls one arm back and lets a full force fist fly into Technic muzzle. The fight was over within a split second and Technic was on the floor out cold with a bloody and possibly broken nose or muzzle.
  When Technic woke up again he found himself on his bed at home. He was hit so hard he did not wake up untill after school.
"Augh...my head...what the hell happened..?" He looked around and saw his mother. She wasn't truely his mother, but a human who adopted him from the orphanage.
"Oh Technic! you're awake..i was so worried..i was afraid you weren't gonna wake up.." She got up and pulled him into his arms. Though He was clearly bigger then she was she did infact pull him into her arms.
"why wouldn't i mom..? I've always pulled through in the end..haven't I?" He sighed softly feeling embarrassed his mother was doing this again.
"But..Technic..you were out for a week.." She said at once.
"W-what?! a week?! how is that even possible?!" He pushed away from her gently. "I could not have been out for that long.."
"B-but you were..the Doctor said a blood vessel was almost snapped and blood could've rushed right out of it.." She said with tears in her eyes.
How is that even possible..i knew that damn bull was strong but that is unbelievable. FUCK...why am i so god damn careless?
 Technic got up and out of bed rubbing his head softly. There was a bandage around it. "What the hell is this?" he groaned and unwrapped it then looked into a mirror. There was nothing different about his head or his muzzle, even though e could've sworn he heard it crack. "I'm sorry i worried you mom.."
"It's ok..just..please, stop picking fights with that bull boy Tech..you know how much i care about you." She wiped her eyes quickly letting out a soft sob.
"Moooom please...i'm not gonna get killed by some stupid bull.." He sighed rubbing his head and He turns to face her. "But fine..i'll try not to fight him anymore..."
 They both went downstairs to the breakfast table. Though it was 11:58 it was still indeed breakfast. Technic grabbed a bowl and poured cereal and milk into it. He ate it rather slowly lost in thought about what happened last week. It was Friday and he was late enough for school that he didn't have to go. Once finished with the cereal he cleaned the bowl and walked to the door."mom, i'm going out! i'll see you later!" Without letting her answer he went outside into the Fall weather.


Technic let out a loud sigh as he walked down the street slowly with his hands in his pockets. "What the hell happened? My muzzle was broken..I could swear that...but..now..it's not...Nothing I know heals that fast. Maybe a dragon or a pheonix, but not a simple fox anthro like me." He stopped and sighed once more, after a few seconds he began walking once again untill a familer scent came across his nose.
"hey tiny!" Spoke an oh too familer voice.
"oh fuck..not now..not here.." Technic's ears folded back and he let out a quiet whimper.
"hey tiny! i'm speaking to you!" said Duke as he walked up to Technic."you little ass, cause you're so damn weak i got expelled and almost thrown in jail for 'disorderly contuct'. I'm grounded for life and under house arrest cause of you, ya puny little shit. But since you passed my house i thought, well hey...i can sneak out for a second. So here i am..gonna beat you into oblivion.."
 Technic whimpered again and turned to face Duke, only to see a fist coming at his face. For him, time seemed to slow down and He slid to the side of the punch. Within a few seconds he ducked under the still extended arm and slammed his foot into Dukes side. At that moment time went back to normal and Duke was staggering backword holding his gut.
"You..w-when did you get so fast?" Duke said with disbelief in his voice.
"Like hell if i should know!" Technic said in responce. Seriously..what the hell happened..it's like he slowed down or something..
 He only shook his head and looked up again seeing Duke sending another punch his way. Again things seemed to slow down to almost a stop as Technic ducked under Dukes arm and brought his index and middle finger between the nose ring and Dukes nose. With a strength Technic didn't even know he had he lifted Duke over his head using just those 2 fingers and slams Duke on the other side of himself. He pulled his hand back as things went to normal again.
 "What the hell?" Duke stood up dusting himself off." Where did that power come from?"
Technic realised he had enough power to take down Duke, what he didn't realise..was that he had too much power for this fight. He ran forward and slammed his hand into Dukes stomach. Only thing was, it didn't just hit him, it when all the way through Duke!.
 Duke blinked several times to take in what just happened and then he yelled out in agony. Technic got his arm, which was covered in blood, out of Duke and stepped back a few times. Duke fell to the ground becoming silent, within seconds a puddle of blood was around him. Technic stared in disbelief and fear, his tail went between his legs again and he looked at his bloody arm. He looked up and noticed there were atleast 20 people, a couple cops even, running towards him.
Oh shit oh shit! what..what the fuck happened? i killed duke?! no way! i don't have that kinda strength? FUCK! this doesn't make any sence!!!
 Technic did the only one thing he could do, he ran, he ran as fast as he could to his house again. Once inside his house he closed the door and went into his room. "Oh fuck..shit..what am i gonna do?! i'm gonna get life sentance for killing a stupid bully!" He was paniced, no, he was beyond paniced. He had to get out of this, he had to leave. "Y-yeah..that's it..i'll..i'll just run away! live in a new town under a new name!..oh..but..what about mom? she'll be worried sick..it would prolly break her heart to know i ran away..or..would it..no..she doesn't want a murderer as a son.." He sighed softly and looked at his bed. He lifted the bloody dripping arm and used the blood to spell out "I'm Sorry" on the bed sheets. He climbed out his window and ran into a forest. Tears of sorrow and fear rolled down his cheeks as he ran into the darkness of the unkown life he seeks.

By the time he had reached a highway his house was packed with cops and investigators.
"Where is my son! tell me now! tell me where my son or so help me god.." His Mother spoke in a furious tone.
"M-m'am! please calm down, we're trying to find that out now. But even if we did find him, we'd have to throw him in jail." Spoke a Dalmation Officer.
"You would do no such thing!" His mother spoke again. "He did nothing wrong! that fucking bull caused this! it was that bulls own fault!" She then collapsed to her knees and began crying uncontrollably."I want my son back! I want my baby!" She screamed out even though everyone knew he wasn't her true child.

While this was happening Technic was walking in a forest near the highway. "Well..this begins it..the road to my new life...One thing always leads to another in this town..that's what mom always told me.." He sighed once and looked at his arm. The blood had finally dried and all he had to do was find some water to clean it off in. "Perhaps...i'll find an easier life where it is i end up..."

End: Chapter One.
« Last Edit: Feb 22 2005, 03:40 PM by Technic »

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« Reply #1 on: Feb 06 2005, 12:21 AM »
Cool...

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« Reply #2 on: Feb 06 2005, 08:21 PM »
I really like the story!  Just a few typos to be fixed and it'll be perfect.  *nods lots and smiles*     :)

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« Reply #3 on: Feb 19 2005, 10:50 PM »
Chapter: 2 - Another

"you..when did you get so fast?"
w-what's this..?
"what the hell? where did that power come from?"
N-no..why am i seeing this..? AAHHH! STOP IT!!
"Stop it!!!..what..? it was only a dream..?" Technic sat up finding himself in pitch black. "Thank god..i only dreamed that i killed duke..w-wait..what's..this?" He looked at the ground as his eyes came into focus. His left hand was on some mold near a tree. "Oh god...it wasn't a dream.." He lowers his head in disgust of himself. "I'm no better then Duke, no...i'm even worse..i KILLED him..augh..why me..?"
Technic stood up again and began walking slowly his head lowered. He knew he was still near the highway, he could hear the cars nearby. He had been walking for what felt like days, he didn't know, he had lost track. During the course of those days he passed at least 2 towns, not stopping at all. When he did rest he found a secluded spot in any sort of forest, big or small. He hasn't eaten at all, but somehow he still has the strength to continue on.

He stopped after while and watched the sun rise, admiring it's beauty. The mix of orange and yellow, with the fading darkness, was a sight he could not resist seeing. Once the sun had risen high enough for his fancy he began his walk once again. Rubbing his stomach a bit he was beginning to find the hunger catching up with him.

About Mid-day He found himself about seven miles from a city, or so the sign he read said so. To his displeasing, the city was seventeen miles away, some jerk had rubbed the one off of the sign. When he did finally reach the city he felt as if he was going to pass out, his stomach was hurting now from lack of food for days. He had the energy to continue walking, but he was too hungry to traverse through yet another town.
"Ok..that's it..i really have to find food..god damnit. If only i had grabbed my money i could buy some food. Then again...my face is probably all over the news. What the hell happened, i don't even understand what i did.."
With a loud sigh he walked through the busy city, getting a few "Hellos" to his amazement. As he continued his search for food he held his right arm over his stomach to try and ease the sounds and pain. His feet were sore, he never wore shoes and was sure the padding was beginning to grow thin on his feet. After what felt like an hour he found himself in some sort of plaza. The place was filled with people and tents and stands.
"Whoa, this could be perfect..but with so many people around..how am i to just..steal the food." He growls to himself softly rubbing his head trying to think.  He tail swayed from side to side and his ears drooped to the side. "Ok..i'll just have to try my best and grab things that won't be missed..yeah..that should work.."
After a few minutes of mental preperation he had an idea. He walked past an apple stand and had his tail knock a few apples from the cart."oh! i'm sorry..lemme pick those up.." He said with a hungry grin on his lips. He picks up the 4 apples he knocked down, but carefully wraps his tail around one of them. He places the other 3 back on the cart. "Please forgive me, my tail..kinda has a mind of it's own sometimes..heh.."
The cart owner just looked up and smiled. "It's no problem Snievel." The man was human and made a slight whistle when he say's his S's.
Snievel? where in the world did he think of a name like that..oh well..best to play along
"If you say so, well..i'll be seeing you." Technic gave a small smile and walked on his way. He could've sworn he heard the cart owner say one more thing, but he was too hungry to care right now. He continued what he did with several carts that sold small fruits, and each time the name Snievel came up. He had accumulated 3 apples, 2 oranges, 1 lemon and about 4 Kiwis.
"Ha! that was much easier then i thought...they didn't even notice i took anything at all..but...i..still shouldn't have stole. Then again i was starving..oh whatever! i've got food and that's all that matters." He bites into the apple and smiles, his stomach still hurt, course he had only taken one bite. After awhile he ate 2 of the apples and the lemon, keeping the rest in his large pockets. "Well, that should be good for now. I hope anyway..." He sighed softly and continues walking down a nearly empty street untill something, or someone rather, catches his glance. "Wha..?"
The person Technic had seen was an anthro, but a very strange one at that. It, or he rather, was a black furred fox anthro. He had red markings down his arm, in a almost zigzag pattern. His ears were red tipped and he had a mask like red marking around his eyes. The boy was dressed in a blue shirt with grey pants, He also had somewhat thick eyeglasses. If Technic didn't know better, he would've sworn that boy was his twin. He thought back to what those cart owners said to him and he figured it out."Snievel.."
"Hm? what?" He boy stopped and turned to face Technic. A small gasp come from the boys mouth.
"Uhm...h-hi!" Technic said to Snievel. Well, now i know why everyone was calling me by this kids name. He smiles faintly. "I've..er..been looking for you!"
"Y-you have..?"
"Yeah! you see...uhm.." come on..think of something..wait..i've got it! "I'm you're cousin! er...Five times removed..how that works i don't know." He smiled a bit now, showing his teeth.
"Oh? you are?"
"Yes, yes i am"
"That's cool! Mom never told me i had a cousin that distant!" Snievel smiled with glee as he walked over to Technic and examined him."Ohh..silver eyes, very pretty."
Please tell me this boy is just easy to impress.. "Uhm..yeah..pretty whatever you say Cuz."

After awhile Snievel led Technic to his home, They walked for about 10 blocks before a delicious auroma filled his nostrils. "Oh my..what a lovely smell.."
"Yeah, that's the dinner mom is making!" Snievel smiled and walked into a rather large house. It was a dull yello color, 3 stories, 5 windows per floor and a large window in the front to the left of the door. "Mom! i'm home! you'd never guess who i met today!" Once Snievel and Technic walked into the kitchen Snievels mother nearly dropped the plate she was holding with a loud gasp.
"W-who is this Snievel..? A friend from school?" She was a fox anthro with bright red fur and black markings, an average Fox.

After about 15 minutes of explaining, Snievels mom, who's name was Samantha, spoke in a soft voice. "Odd, i never did know we had relatives that distant. Well, none the less, you're family, and family has to stick together." She smiled softly, then surved dinner for the 3 of them. After a pleasent meal and chat with Snievels brother and sister, Technic was shown the room he was to stay in. It was rather cozy, it was painted a dark blue, the bed was large enough to fit 3 people on it. Technic layed on the bed pulling the sheets over him and looking up at the ceiling.
"Who would've guessed..i can already start another life..i wonder if the people here will be accepting of me.." He closed his eyes and yawned softly. "Oh well, i'll just have to wait and find out...i should take a shower tomarrow though..blech..i smell nasty.." He chuckled to himself and soon drifted into sleep.

End: Chapter 2

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« Reply #4 on: Feb 22 2005, 10:21 AM »
Wow,I really like this story. Keep writing :3

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« Reply #5 on: Mar 16 2005, 04:08 PM »
Chapter 3 - The Father.


"I'm your..er...Cousin..five times removed.."
Why don't these stupid dreams just stop..? Technic awoke from his deep slumber finding it early in the afternoon, sometime around one pm. He crawled out of bed, falling off it would more suit what happened. Upon trying to get out of sheets his tail got tangled within it and since the sheet's ends were tucked tightly under the mattress, he had issues just pulling the sheet off the bed to get his tail out. Upon walking too far from the bed the sheets tugged his tail and he soon felt his feet fall out from under him. He smacked into the ground with a loud thud and rubbed his chin, for that's what hit the ground first. "Oooow..."

After finally getting untangled he poked his head out of the rooms door and looked to his left, towards the master bedroom, then to his right, towards the bathroom. He grinned softly and padded his way towards the bathroom. Once in, he looked in the mirror and then at the bathtub, it was nothing more then a large shower, no true tub at all. Shaking his head a bit he locked the bathroom door after closing it and began undressing. Once stripped of his clothing he turned on the shower, waiting for the water to reach it's temperature, he stood there, tilting his head back and forth causing several pops to be heard. When he checked the water, he found it scortching, the way he liked it. He stepped into the shower and yelped softly from the extreme heat. He looked around a bit letting the water drench his fur. "Hm...now, where's that damn shampoo for..aha!" He grabs a large bottle near the soap, it was silvery in color. He opened it up and put a small amount of the 'shampoo' onto his padded palm and rubbed his palms together. After a few moments he began rubbing the lathered shampoo all across his fur, minding his privates of course. After he was sure he was covered in the shampoo he washed it out slowly, making sure to get every bit of dirt and dust out of his fur from the previous days walk.

After finally getting out of the shower he turned it off grinning to himself, he felt so refreshed. He sighed softly and grabbed a rather large towel and begins drying his fur off. When he was done he couldn't help but laugh at himself when looking in the mirror. His fur had become puffed out and he looked like a walkiing puffball with ears, arms and legs. He took a comb and began smoothing out his fur with it, only parts that didn't become smooth was the fur around his joints. They always seemed to stick up or out, no matter how hard he tried. There was nothing he could do about it, almost every anthro he's seen has the same problem.

Finally he walked out of the bathroom only dressed in the articles of clothing ment for below the waist. He walked into the guest bedroom, which he called his now, and stretched a bit. He first reached to his lower paws and touched his toes, then stretched up as much as he could, he found he could actually touch the ceiling of the room and he only grinned. After doing both of those for about twenty minutes he pulled a shirt on and made his way downstairs.
Once downstairs he looked into the kitchen seeing Snievel, his mother, and another anthro he's never seen before.
Must be the father.. "Uhm..G'morning everyone.." He said with a faint smile across his muzzle.
Snievel looked up and smiled brightly. "Good Morning Technic!" He looked at Tech for a few seconds longer and went back to eating, it appeared they were having lunch.
The large, black furred anthro stared at Technic for a few moments then grinned, "So..Cousin five times removed hm?" His voice sounded deep, but not threatening in any possible way.
Technic felt relieved by the calmness the father was showing. "Yeah..that's..right." He felt a bit angry with himself for lying to all of the people in the room. "I'm..Technic, though I'm sure they've told you that already."
The father nodded once and took a bite of his Roast Beef sandwich. "Yes..I've been told everything. How you were sent here by your mother to teach you some...Manners correct?"
"That is Correct sir."
"Alright then, I believe it is fair that I tell you my name now." He smiled, "My name is Demetri."
"It is a pleasure to meet you Sir." Technic nodded and smiled to him. He looked down at the table seeing there was a roast beef sandwhich and smiled. "Would it be alright if I ate this on the go? I'd really love to check out this town."
Demetri nodded, "Of course..Snievel, I'd like you to accompany him, show him the town."
Snievel smiled and stood up, he had finished his lunch already. "Of course!"
"Well..Lets get going then." Technic grabbed the sandwich and made his way outside. Snievel close behind. "Alright..lead the way Cousin." He smiled and looked around slowly. Ah..this is gonna be a great new life.. They began walking through the town slowly without further hesitation.

End-Chapter 3.

((yeah..and sorry for any images that may have gone to head during the shower part. But this IS an more..ermm..adultish story so..bleh..))

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« Reply #6 on: Mar 18 2005, 06:43 PM »
It's a great story. Don't worry about the nekkidness part,after all it's quite realistic.

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« Reply #7 on: Mar 18 2005, 07:06 PM »
Quality stuff cant wait for more
"The rules of Balence
Light cannot exsist without Dark.
Black and White
Day and night
Love and Hate
Life and Death.
These are the princeples of life"

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« Reply #8 on: Mar 19 2005, 10:51 AM »
its cool. ^^ thats all that matters. <_<

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« Reply #9 on: Mar 25 2005, 07:39 PM »
Chapter 4 - Her.

Technic walked down the street with the boy he'll be calling his cousin for probably the rest of his life, Snievel. They had been walking all day and His paws were really aching now. He glanced over at Snievel and sighed, "Man..can we take a break? You've been telling me nonstop about your town."
"..And over there is..wait..what?" Snievel blinked slowly stopping, his head tilted to the side as he blinked at Technic once more. "A break? Sure!" He smiled excitedly and sat down on the conviently located bench.
"Finally..my paws..are killing me.." He lifts his left food and rested his leg on his right knee. He began massaging the paw quietly, his paws still hurt from all the walking he did when he ran away. "Well..at least I learned where all the important buildings are.."
"Yeah, that's always good." Snievel grinned and watched Technic closely.
"When does school start again? I mean..Vacation?"
"Tomarrow dude.."
"That soon? Man..and I just got here."
"Yeah well, It's not that hard. I mean come on, I pass all my classes with flying colors."
"Yeah..You're right. Besides, I was one of the top students at my school."

Technic and Snievel talked for what must've felt like hours, about the weirdest things. Technic talked about oranges and Snievel actually interupted him with the topic of apples. The topics went back and forth like that, soon they had a huge list of things they talked about, apples, oranges, pies, chickens, pigs, earthworms. Anyone could've named off anything and They would've talked about it. Without warning there was a large thud in the distance and Snievel jumped up, his ears folded back. "Uh..T-tech..we best get home.."
"Why?..Come on we were having fun" Technic still sat his tail swaying happily behind him.
"T-trust me, we best just go home." Snievel looked around taking a few steps.
"But why man?"
"Well..Have you heard of..M-macros..?" Snievels voice was quivering.
"Well..yeah..who hasn't? They're huge..they change in size and love wrecking things." Technic smirked thinking this was another random topic.
"W-well..This town is prone to Macro attacks.." Snievels tail went between his legs as he stepped backwards.
"Really?! Alright!" Technic jumped up and looked around, his tail swaying faster the before. "Always wanted to meet one."
"Are you crazy?! They'll crush you to dust! Come on! lets just go home!"
"Snievel no! I'll never get a chance like this again!" He was about to run off towards the ever louder thuds, but Snievel grabbed his arm.
"Technic no! You're coming home!" His voice quivered more now.
"I'm taking this chance..you're not stopping me.." He glared at Snievel, his voice serious, as well as his glare. Snievel didn't know if it was Technic's tone or his eyes that cause him to do it, but he let go. "That's a good boy.." Technic pivoted on his left paw and ran off towards the thuds again.

After only a few minutes of running Technic tripped and fell into a hole. "What's this..?" He stood up slowly dusting himself off. "Damn holes..Wait.." He climbed out of the hole and stared at it, jaw lowered. "It's..a..paw print? Holy shit.." He looked around and noticed more. "My god, they're huge!" He looks around again and runs off in the direction the paws were facing hoping to catch up with the enormous being who made the prints. "Huh..kinda resemble mine.." He stopped dead in his tracks as he almost fell into another one. "Damnit! close one.." Technic shuddered a bit and closed his eyes as he glanced into the massive print. There was blood within in, and he swore he saw a body. "Oh...g-god.." He stands there shaking a bit. After a few moments he opened his eyes and lookd up, and there it was. The being that was destroying the town, not even 100 yards away was the beast. "Well..here's m-my chance.." He took a few more steps towards the giant beast.
The Macro was on it's hands and knees grabbing several beings around it, human and anthro. Within a few seconds those in her hands were heading up towards it's mouth, screaming as it happened. Technic stood there with fear, he closed his eyes and looked away again. It didn't help , he could hear the beast chewing on the innocent's bodies. The sound of bone against teeth made his entire body shake, the sound of the bodies ripped apart almost made him vomit in place. He opened his eyes again his body still shaking. The beast was turning around, he was beginning to see what it looked like. The first thing he noticed was the being's torso. It had a shirt on, red in color, what stuck him most was the fact that the being had breasts. "It's..a..girl!" He slapped his hands over his mouth, but it was too late the beast had turned around even more quickly now. The silver fur of the female beast flowed in the wind a bit as it loud out a loud growl. It's muzzle was course and covered in blood, teeth bared and stained with blood as well.
Technic had tried turning to run away, but with the beast so close all she had to do was take but one step. The next thing Technic felt was the massive front paws of the beast slamming down on his body, he was pinned. "No! let go! Get off me!!" He struggled and watched as the beast lowered it's head to him. This is it..she's..she's going to eat me... Technic could smell all the blood on the beast breath as it's head was near his. He was pinned from just below his ribs down, there was nothing he could do now. Technic closed his eyes, he didn't want her teeth gnashing down at him the last thing he sees. Soon he felt something wet press against his body. Oh god..she's tasting me now.. The next thing that happened surprised Technic beyond all belief, instead of the pain of being chewed to a bloody pulp, the wet feeling came and went over and over. "W-what's this..?" He opened his eyes and stared up at the beast. Her eyes were closed and she continued licking him. Licking!? she's licking me?!. "What is the meaning of this?!" He struggled a little and looked at her face once more. "W-what..I know that muzzle..M-Mellissa..?" The beast opened his eyes and smirked as it stopped licking him.
"Took yeh damn long enough."
"No way...You're the Macro who's been attacking this town?"
"Well who else would it be? Godzilla?" She laughs loudly and looked back down at him with a slight growl. "Where the HELL have you been?!" She increased the pressure of her pinning on Technic. "I'm been worried sick you little ass!"
Technic closes his eyes as his ears folded back, he had neglected to tell his girlfriend he ran away. "I'm sorry Mellissa..I..I should've told you.."
"You're fucking right you should've told me! I knew Duke was dead, but I expected you to take your punishment like the law abidding Fox you are.."
"Please..could you get off me..You're crushing me.."
"Well no KIDDING, I'm over 300 feet tall Einstein." Mellissa lifted her large upper paw from him and stood to her max height. Within a few seconds she was shrinking, every part of her, including her clothes. "I missed you..." She finally said upon reaching her normal height of Seven foot. Without a seconds warning she pulled Technic from the ground and held her tight in her arms, nuzzle her head against his.
"I know..I've missed you two.." He felt like a total retard forgetting to even tell Mellissa, the love of his 'old' life, he had to run away.
"I bet you feel all badass now for being on the run. Hm? Do you?" She smirked and kept him held in his arms.
"Well..not exactly..Could we discuss this later? The cops are coming ya know.." His tail swayed back and forth slowly.
"But of course darling." She set him down and took off into a sprint. Technic not far behind.

"So..since when are you a macro?" Technic sat on a dark park bench next to his towering Girlfriend. He bit into an apple while waiting for her.
"I've always been one..I've also always had the craving for flesh like that too.." She sighed and looked at Technic with her ears drooping slightly. "I had to hunt to stop myself from mauling you or anyone else I cared for to death."
"I see...well, that does explain why you were gone for days on end. What do your folks think of this?"
"Oh, they used to wish I would stop...They..erm..actually detained me in my room for a couple days, refusing to let me out. So.." She looks away.
"So you grew and ate them.." Technic said as if reading her mind. "Yeah..It was all over the news..Though they never did know it was you.."
"Y-yeah..." She looks back at him and sighs softly, her ears drooped. "Hey..I got a place to stay here..It's not cozy or anything..but it's got a bed. " She grinned a bit and looked at him.
"Uh..Mellissa..I'm not..Horny right now.."
"Oh? that bulde in your pants says otherwise."
"I have no bulge!!" He growled a little, He knew this was a joke going on between him and Mellissa, but it still bugged him that she would also do that.
"I know I know..Lets just go and get some rest.." She stood up and began walking, again, Technic not far behind.

Upon reaching the house Mellissa spoke up Technic looked up and around. "Not that bad looking..few..erm..holes..but not that bad.." As if on cue a part of the houses tatter roof fell apart.
"Well, the bed is on the first floor, no holes on the ceiling of that floor." She smiled and scratched the back of her neck.
"It's someplace to sleep at least.." He grinned and stood on his toes to kiss her cheek.
They walked into the house and Technic blinked at the neatly made bed. "Well, the bed has to be the best part of this house." He grinned and sat down on it as Mellissa layed down on one side. "To think..we both ran away to the same town, just at different times."
"Yeah, Well..I knew I'd see you again one way or another." She smirked and pulled him down on the bed next to her. After doing so she wrapped her arms around him and pulled her close to her body. "I Missed you so much Technic.."
"I know..I missed you too.." He curled up slightly, cuddling Mellissa as she held him close. They held each other like that untill they fell asleep, but even then they did not let go of each other.

End-Chapter 4

((yeah..plot twist and mushy stuff..get the fuck used to it <.<;; uh..sorry ))
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« Reply #10 on: Mar 26 2005, 10:13 AM »
you still astound me with this story tech a few typos aside this is great stuff to read keep it up
"The rules of Balence
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« Reply #11 on: May 29 2005, 04:05 PM »
You should write mooore!  It's such a wonderful story..   :)

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« Reply #12 on: Jul 29 2005, 11:22 PM »
Chapter 5 - Secrets?

During the nigh Technic found he ws hearing the voices her heard each night he slept since the day he killed duke. Though this time, something was different, he didn't hear himself speaking, not even someone he knew. the voice was different, darker if one could relate of tone of speaking as 'dark'.
"Is it time? Has the..."
Oddly enough he heard another voice come in, this one sounding female. "Yes, it has begun, just as it was told by that crazy old man we used to have working for us." The second speaker chuckled.
"Good, oh how I cannot wait for.."
Once again the second voice interupted. "Shush, someone's coming."
With that all was silent, everything, Technic could see no dream, no faces.

Within moments the black furred fox awoke from his sleep, his head against a pillow. He sat up, rubbing that mat of fur 'pon his head he called his hair. He shook it out a bit, then then let it fall once again. He looked around to see that Mellissa was no where to be found. He sniffed the air a bit, his tail fwumped against the mattress as he caught the scent of someone near. He stood up, flinging the sheets off him. With that he padded outside the wreck of the building and noticed his love sitting on part of a broken wall. "Oh, g'morning there Mellissa.."
The wolf anthro looked to him and smiled. "G'morning." She didn't say much else, and turned her head back to the town.
"What're you doing out here?" Technic had asked while looking around. He had only just noticed that the 'shack' they had slept in was a little ways outside the town, up a small hill even. He figured it was a poor place to hide, being it was not surrounded by any buildings at all. He glances around, noticing there was rubble from what he assumes would be other houses.
"Just..sitting." She looked over the town not far from them, her tail swaying as the wind blew her long hair into her face. After a moment she closed her eyes, "Something doesn't feel right today."
"What?" Technic blinked as he asked. "Having another one of those..spiritual moments where you predict something, that almost never happens?"
"Exactly.." Mellissa looked to him, her eyes opening slowly. "Though, this one feels..different. Somethings telling me that by weeks end, something terrible will happen. Not to who, or what it is."
"That's what it is everytime."
"Well, this time feels different."
"Keep telling yourself that..you know it's not gonna happen though."
"Why don't you ever take me seriously?" She growls softly in the back of her throat. "This time feels so very different. It feels as if the spirits are keeping secrets from me."
"Secrets? Oh come on. Just drop this and lets get some food. I'm sure The family that's watching over me is worried already." With that he began walking down the slight slope of the hill towards the town. Mellissa merely shook her head and lept from the wall and walked behind him.

Unknowing to the couple, there was a creature approuching the town, the thing was heavily cloaked though. As it stopped, something lashed from behind the cloak and struck a tree nearby. The thing that lashed out left a deep mark in the tree. The figure crouched and pulled his hand from the sleeves of the cloak. it pressed it's palm do the grass, which seemed to have been matted down, as if something slept there.
"Close.." Spoke the creature, it's voice heavy, sounding almost as if it was even 'cloaking' it's own voice. "Very close." With that it stood upright and began walking slowly onward.

Back at the town Technic and Mellissa were simply walking through the town, their tails swaying back and forth, on occassion they linked with each other for a moment. After what felt like an hour, they had reached the house that was Snievels. Technic poked his head inside and looked around. "Hello?" There came no answer, then something stirred on the couch. It was Samantha, Sneivels mother.
"Oh thank heavens!" She stood up as Technic walked into the house. "Where have you been?"
"Out. I ehm..ran into a friend yesterday and stayed at her place. Would it be alright if she came in? She's right outside." He smiled faintly as he looked to the other fox.
"Hm?" Samantha peered outside for a moment, noticing the seven foot tall wolf anthro. "Of course she may come in."
"Alright then." He motioned to Mellissa to come in, thus, she walked inside and looked around. "Well, this is where I've been staying." He smiles and walks to the couch. Mellissa blinks once and follows him, sitting down before he does. He then sits next to her as he watches Samantha walking to a chair across from them.
"So, did you really, do what Snievel said you did?"
"Yes ma'am. That's how I ran into Mellissa here. "He paused to look up at his tall friend. "She was chasing that giant in order to get back at it for nearly killing her and her family." He nods, though he was sure he was gonna get some yelling at by Mellissa a little later, he didn't know why, he just felt it would happen.
"You're not keeping any secrets from me, are you Tech?" Spoke Samantha as her ears twitched, tail swaying a little.
"Oh heavens no..I wouldn't lie to you." Technic smiles, his own tail twitching a bit. "Anyway, I thought I'd stop in just to tell you I was alright, gonna head out with Mellissa here to check out more of the town. "
"Fine fine, but I want you back before night this time, you had us all worried sick."
"I know, I promise I will." He smiles and stood, Mellissa doing the same. With that they walked back out the door, and into the large town. As they walked they both wondered what was in store for them this week. Also, as much as Technic wouldn't admit it, the little moment Mellissa hard only an hour before didn't leave his mind. He looked around, feeling that he himself should be ready for anything.

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« Reply #13 on: Jul 30 2005, 04:30 AM »
I love this story
"The rules of Balence
Light cannot exsist without Dark.
Black and White
Day and night
Love and Hate
Life and Death.
These are the princeples of life"