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The Lounge => The Gallery => Topic started by: TalonShadowfox on Mar 12 2007, 03:30 PM
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^_^ here is my first poem on kitsuneparadise.com forums... enjoy...
Ode of the Fox
Fox of purest snow
Blanketing the world in peaceful silence
Eyes cold and as empty as ice
Such is the fox of moonlight
Fox of scorching flame
Mirroring the passion of the heart
Eyes golden, shining with pride
Such is the fox of dawn
Fox of the tempest sand
Spreading hope to the world, oppressing despair
Eyes of knowledgeable wisdom, granting patience
Such is the fox of the sun
Fox of crimson shadow
Capturing the world in a twilight of chaos
Eyes of hell coal, glinting with enigmatic beauty
Such is the fox of dusk
Fox of darkest horrors
Reflecting the blackness of the corrupt heart
Eyes of sorrowing friend, hoping for a miracle
Such is the fox of the midnight
Fox of ancient forests
Jealously guarding forbidden treasure
Eyes of the ancients, full of untrusting fury
Such is the fox of nature
Fox of stony spires
Singing long and mournfully to the moon
Eyes full of loneliness and longing
Such is the fox of the serenade
Fox of the black void
Ever-silent, ever-watchful, ever-waiting
Eyes warm with lust and passion
Such is the fox of stardust
Eight foxes around a star
Keeping balance, peace, and hope
Eyes cold and warm, lusty and hopeful, cruel and heartless
Waiting for a hero,
Such is the fox…
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That, sir/madam/insert sex here, was absolutely beautiful. It was haunting, yet wonderful at the same time; it sent shivers down my spine. Never ever ever ever^100(!50^100) give up on your writing. Ever.
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Wow. Just wow. 5 out of 5 for being awesome. Almost shed a tear... :o
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you really thought it was that good? :)
I'm glad that people like my works