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Title: beginning of a novel?
Post by: TalonShadowfox on May 15 2007, 09:17 PM
I wrote this for a creative writing class assignment and sort of got sucked into the writing itself  :)  anyways I think that it has a strong probability of becoming a novel of sorts... you guys will tell me what you think of it, n'est pas?

note: you have to download it

Umm yeah you guys can tell me what you think in this thread if you want to...
Title: beginning of a novel?
Post by: TalonShadowfox on May 16 2007, 06:23 PM
Yup its offical I'm going to make a sequel atleast... be sure to check sometime around monday...
Title: beginning of a novel?
Post by: TalonShadowfox on May 18 2007, 04:52 PM
-_- meh... its going to be at least until Monday before i can submit the update of chapter one... still can't believe i left it on the school computer...
Title: beginning of a novel?
Post by: TalonShadowfox on May 23 2007, 11:07 AM
:)  Updated story! I expanded the dialogue and revised some descripitions... like always comments are encouraged...
Title: beginning of a novel?
Post by: TalonShadowfox on May 29 2007, 07:00 PM
Me again I added an updated version of nevermore replaced the one in the first post from now on all updates will replace the document in the first post.

In other news i have started chapter two and will be posted below the current updated version of chapter 1 (nevermore) :)
Title: beginning of a novel?
Post by: TalonShadowfox on Jun 03 2007, 05:29 PM
Chapter 2 is now up! enjoy feed back is always welcome! :D
Title: beginning of a novel?
Post by: TalonShadowfox on Jun 24 2007, 12:50 PM
Sorry chapter 3 is taking so long i've hit an inspirational road block with writing of late... as it is now its around half done... I am going to try to have it finished by Wednesday... As always critique is encouraged for my stories... if you wish to remain anonymously you can always email me any questions or comments, or if you want to discuss any of it in length you can always IM me... :)
Title: beginning of a novel?
Post by: TalonShadowfox on Jun 25 2007, 06:33 PM
Chapter 3 is now up! I hope every one enjoys it! Note that chapter 3 has graphic violence and is slightly suggestive... :o anyways enjoy  :)
Title: beginning of a novel?
Post by: TalonShadowfox on Jul 03 2007, 08:23 PM
the saga continues in chapter 4! and yes i do have to be cruel to at least one of my characters  :)