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The Lounge => The Gallery => Topic started by: Kynelongtail on Apr 11 2007, 12:03 AM
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Ok, here's a few of my poems, Hope ya like them!
Bound[/u]
...in spirit
to this mortal coil.
Power to spare,
but no way to channel.
I feel this strength
burning deep in my soul,
yet far too much power
for this form to control.
I search for a way,
every day, every hour,
for a way to unbind
this near limitless power.
For this, my friends,
is my only want,
and without this
I spend my days in vaught.
For I cannot rest easy,
in any day, any hour,
untill I find a way
to release my soul's power.
Longing[/u]
... for you
to be near me.
To know you are here
and forever will be.
We once were, long ago,
But it was ended by another,
envious of what we had.
He took you from me,
and tried to break me,
But he failed, and now I am back
from the darkness in which he left me.
But you couldn't be mine,
not as you are,
I must first free you
from the prison in which he put you.
Now I am left to long,
for your touch, your voice,
the look of happiness on your face,
untill I can break the cage that contains you.
But we will be again,
and very soon indeed,
for I will not rest
untill I set you free.
You Are[/u]
You are the sunshine in my day,
You are the bright star to guide my way.
You are the good thoughts always on my mind,
You are the one to whom I’ll always be kind.
You are the gentle touch on my skin,
You are the warmth that lies within.
You are the inspiration in my art,
You are the missing piece to this man’s heart.
You are the strength to help me bear
Every day, hour, second that I am not there.
You are the one who this man’s dear
Promise to shall always be clear.
You are all this, and so much more
To this man, than words could ever store.
yeah, long as heck post, but let me know whatcha think!
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and here's another of mine:
The Power[/u]
… that I have
Deep in my soul,
So close, near to grasp,
Yet too far from me to own.
I can almost see it,
Nearly know what it is,
But the barrier before it
Doesn’t let me in.
It’s not that I’m greedy,
Not in the least,
I only want to know
What truly is this beast…
That dwells within me
And holds all my power,
So that I can learn to control
And be the master of my power.
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I like 'em all. Especially "Longing" ... It's a lot like the kind that I write, minus the emotastic tendancies. I salute you on a job well done.
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Thanks, good to hear positive feedback.
OK, here's a free form i wrote a while ago, tell me whatcha think!
Cold
The cold reminds me of a few things. The sensation of cold reminds me of sadness, loneliness, rejection. Sometimes I shun the cold, because I’m feeling happy, or too into things to give it heed. Sometimes I welcome it because I feel the way that it reminds me of. I like the cold, because it lets us use things that we wouldn’t use otherwise. Nerves would never trigger, the need for warmth wouldn’t be noticed or needed. Sometimes I don’t like it though, because it only amplifies what pessimistic feelings I hold. I’ve noticed that the world in a general sense is a very cold and mean place, but it does have some warm spots in it. People seek out these warm spots, because we don’t like the feelings that the cold reminds us all of. We all have our warm spots, they may be in different places, or may travel around with other people, and when we have the feelings that the cold reflects, we go and find these warm spots to help rid ourselves of the cold we feel. Sometimes I envy the people that have found their warms spots, because I’ve yet to truly find one of my own. Oh well, I guess I’ll have to keep looking until I find it, for now I’ll live with what gets me by; until I can find my way out of the cold.
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and yet another of mine, man, these deep moments are just killer on me sometimes.
Lonely...
Is how I feel today.
Isolated, excluded, farther away
from everyone than I have felt in a long time.
Nothing...
will help me today.
No words, no actions, no objects will cure this hurt,
so deep it goes past the spirit.
Distance...
I feel so much between me and everything else.
So far away, I can't interact with anyone
no matter my attepmts.
Loneliness...
is all I have today.
Nothing else, but the cold and deep pain
that permeate my feelings.
Alone...
in my mind, in my heart, in my soul.
Maybe I'll find something to heal this tomorrow,
but today, I have nothing, but the cold, isolating pain...
of the loneliness...